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Rilrae slayedby ~kenderlein

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Rilrae is © Dragoness

Old sketch that never made it.

I don't know where the error is, but there is a proportional error somewhere. It looks bad enough not to colour, so I'll probably start over with a new pic later... or maybe with Kuraii instead... don't know.

*ladyofdragons Sep 16, 2004

Well I think don't it's anything you couldn't fix just by scaling parts in Photoshop. I'd make her head smaller and her breasts a little bigger, and then see if that makes her torso harmonize more.

I don't think the arms are so bad, but swords a little off. The one on our left is turned down too much; the blade isn't foreshortened quite enough in relation to the crossguard and her hand. The back one... Needs to either rotate so the pommel comes more towards and the blade more away, OR, go the easy route and have a bit of the blade peek out the other side of her thigh. Right now it looks a bit like she's stabbing herself in the thigh. :doh2:

You could also try giving her a little more chin-- maybe a little less rounded but more space between the lips and the bottom of her chin.

I like the look of this though! Her eyes and horns especially. And I love her realistic curves! *applauds*

~duece Sep 16, 2004 Professional Interface Designer

id say it was the foreshortening of the arms, cause they are always a bastard to do.

but its still good i reckons.

~lostandnotfound Sep 16, 2004

i think i can see a couple slight errors, the facial proportions the facial features are slightly shifted over to the left i think it looks like or it could be that the two halves of thew face's shape dont quite marry up, it is quite hard to tell personaly i think it would be a shame not to colour it though, i'm currently trying to teach myself how to use photo shop i suck!

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